Thursday, March 25, 2010
sex without love
This poem left me speechless. so many girls go threw this things that she spoke about. is like she been threw this emotion. its a battle between your flesh and your spirit. the body is asking for it because is lustful. i felt that this writer is having a struggle within her own-self. like your walking and asking yourself why do i do this? some people will judge you call you names like in this line "How does it feel to be trash now that you are trash," after a guy gets what they want they will use this similar word. you have lower yourself just because your addicted to se. the more you give yourself away the more you feel less worthy. when she said you have se to please the one you love i like so many guys ask for it as proof of your love. a girl gives it up and goes like hey i already did it with this one why not with this one then breakup and at the end you will ended up feeling disgusted and wont be able to stop because it is normal to you to be sleeping around with boy. you know its wrong that its not you how she saids in the poem but you cant stop. you feel worthless because you gaved that one special thing away and now your nothing. people just dont understand once you give it you will never get it back. you give it to that one special guy but that will brake your heart believe it or not. that whole that now you have between your leg i the whole that was created in your heart. someone didnt value you enough to wait for marriage. i love this poem its what happening alot with mostly every kind of age people.
Thursday, March 11, 2010
The fish
"The Fish" made me feel like if the writer is a curious person. From my perspective she doesn't go out fishing very often because in that case she wouldn't be describing this one fish. I believe this poem is an example of our lives compared to animals (fishes) because everything that she would say about the fish, she would compare it to the human world. While shes describing the fish shes letting the readers know in a way or another that this fish has gone threw a lot. The fish put up many battles but because of its old age it was time to stop fighting and give up. It seems like if shes having flashback because of this fish. I am actually struggling because the writer made me feel like she fish wasnt moving or doing anything to fight for freedom or to breath. Which seems weird because i know a fish moves alot when it can not breath and when a person cant breath they cant stay still either. At the end shes yelling out rainbow, in the bible rainbow is what God told Noah not to do, destroying mankind in such a way ever again.
And I will remember my covenant, which [is] between me and you and every living creature of all flesh; (Genesis 9:13-16, KJV) The way she describe this fish is similar to this quote that i took from the bible. She might be religious, curious of Gods creation and just put the fish back because of Gods covenant to Noa. We cannot destroy just because we want to and that is why i believe she saids rainbow rainbow. Our environment is a beautiful place which this one ugly fish let the writer see.
And I will remember my covenant, which [is] between me and you and every living creature of all flesh; (Genesis 9:13-16, KJV) The way she describe this fish is similar to this quote that i took from the bible. She might be religious, curious of Gods creation and just put the fish back because of Gods covenant to Noa. We cannot destroy just because we want to and that is why i believe she saids rainbow rainbow. Our environment is a beautiful place which this one ugly fish let the writer see.
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